Bit of improvement in the description

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@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ and a brief overview of what's been going down with cows, the bovine
 platform game."
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-I stopped uploading videos of cows development because my computer died a while ago because of water damage, now I'm finally in the land of the living with some gamey updates: Cows and Polarity II are the two games I'm focusing on this year; Polarity II should release sometime this year since it's pretty simpl, and Cows should have a one level demo by december.
+I stopped uploading videos of cows development because my computer died a while ago because of water damage, now I'm finally in the land of the living with some gamey updates: Cows and Polarity II are the two games I'm focusing on this year; Polarity II should release sometime this year since it's pretty simple, and Cows should have a one level demo by december.
 
 Polarity II is still being developed with MonoGame and there are now working linux, mac and windows builds (That was the february goal. yay!) The march goal was to get the waves system and the first wave working, but I got sidetracked and didn't get to coding it. I do have some work to show on the wave system though, so here are some blurry pics from the journal.
 

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 title: Acerca de Ben Beltran
-description: "N, S o Vocal es escrito por Ben Beltran cuando anda de humor. Ben... pues, hace cosas bonitas y así."
+description: "N, S o Vocal es escrito por Ben Beltran cada vez que
+ciertas reglas complicadas de astronomía se cumple. Ben... pues, hace cosas bonitas y así."
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     <h1>Ben Beltran</h1>
-    <p>N, S o Vocal es escrito por <a href="http://twitter.com/benbeltran">Ben Beltrán</a> cuando anda de humor (malo,
-    generalmente.) Ya sea desarrollo web, videojuegos o nerdura general.
+    <p>N, S o Vocal es escrito por <a href="http://twitter.com/benbeltran">Ben Beltrán</a>
+    cuando no está muy ocupado no escribiendo aquí
+    sobre desarrollo web, videojuegos o nerdura general.
     No es raro ver español e inglés usados libremente en el sitio, lo
     cual ha causado protestas de muchos grupos que creen que el internet
     no debería estár en dos lenguajes al mismo tiempo.</p>
     <p>N, S o Vocal también es parte importante de las reglas de
-    acentuación en español. Recuerden siempre niños, N, S o Vocal y SEGA.
+    acentuación en español.
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@@ -25,8 +27,9 @@ description: "N, S o Vocal es escrito por Ben Beltran cuando anda de humor. Ben.
         href="https://plus.google.com/106965839947310908254">G+</a></li>
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-    <p><em>N, S o Vocal is written by <a href="http://twitter.com/benbeltran">Ben Beltrán</a> when in the right mood
-      (angry, generally), be it web development, videogames or general
+    <p><em>N, S o Vocal is written by <a href="http://twitter.com/benbeltran">Ben Beltrán</a>
+      when he's not too busy not writing here
+      about web development, videogames or general
       nerdstuffs. It is not uncommon to see english and spanish freely
       mixed in the site, which has caused protests from many groups who
       believe the internet should not be in two languages at the same